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Friday, February 23, 2007

A vision of self destruction

A tale of a relationhip gone awry
A dream causing her to wake.
She started often wanting to cry
A terrifying dream - vivid not a fake

The image of a double pointed knife
held between their chests
Trying so hard to finish their life
difficult breathing heaving breasts

He is trying hard to pull her in
She pushes hard to resist
heart to heart the dagger pins
her strength resistance anger hissed

Her will and need to live survives
Her need triumphs over his fearsome hold
Her life and control now revives
The dream so real leaves her cold

2 Comments:

Blogger Hope said...

WOW! I can so relate to this! Both (of today's posts) are well written...

Take care,
Hope~

6:50 am  
Blogger beardysanchez said...

I was chatting to agood fiend at work and she recalled this dream. The imagery was very powerful. Thanks again

9:01 pm  

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