http://www.blogger.com/template-choose.g?blogID=32707431 brite-orange: Castles within

Tuesday, November 28, 2006

Castles within

With brick walls there are no complaints
The barriers within are the real constraints
Emotions choke and barriers appear
Defense mechanisms. What do I fear?

Bursting pressures build to a kind of madness
The worst is an oppressive crushing sadness
Emotions explode and cracks open screaching
dislodged bricks fall heart wrenching

Views of alternative living snatched
Delicate and fragile times plans hatched
Grab this new delight with open arms
Walls that never come down is what harms

Change from without shores up the wall
and resistance grows stronger
Changes from within and the castle will fall
changes from inside last the longer

Push hard and the wall will tumble
A new way of life in to which you stumble
Be brave and adjust to this better place
enjoy the relief and the heart's open space

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your poetry sure speaks to me!

Changes from within... those are the most challenging and rewarding all at the same time.

"Be brave and adjust to this better place
enjoy the relief and the heart's open space"

Love it! Keep posting!

Hope

8:15 am  
Blogger beardysanchez said...

Thanks HOPE

I liked the feelings and metaphor in this too.
I seem to be getting more properly in touch

7:35 pm  

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